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fool for two

I've posted the text on several 'native' boards to check out if it will work as I see it. Of course, I know that the lines "fool for one, fool for two" don't make much sense per se, but I'm curious how they will be conceived.

fool for one
fool for two
fool enough for me and you
fool for one
fool for two
why are you doing what you do

you've laid all our secrets bare
we're the topic of the day
just go to the market square
to listen what the people say

our weaknesses, our private life,
all our foibles, all our faults
public where the gossip's rife
not a chance to call a halt

fool for one
fool for two
fool enough for me and you
fool for one
fool for two
why are you doing what you do

our kids scorn of the class
while we're the scorn of our town
hear them snicker where we pass
did you intend to play their clown?

fool for one
fool for two
fool enough for me and you
fool for one
fool for two
make fools of our children, too

when I fell in love with you
I found you open-hearted and outspoken
I'd no idea there'd be a risk
of a family life out in the open

fool for one
fool for two
fool enough for me and you
fool for one
fool for two
make fools of our children, too

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Bernd on :

Some feedback I received:

The chorus is absolutely brilliant in my opinion. Easily the best lyric I've seen from you
And the verses are just strong enough to support the chorus without competing with it. Can't find a thing I think needs improving on this lyric.
Verlon

Hey mate...I agree with hard twist...the chorus is brilliant! I like the verses too and I think they work well with the chorus....look forward to hearing them too music.
Darren

=> the chorus seems to get across just fine :-)

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