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rewrite - burning in the cold

I rewrote "burning in the cold" to match a backingtrack. In the end I didn't use the lyrics at all but wrote new ones instead. The resulting song is called "Crownie" (see the next entry).

with cold, piercing eyes
you're looking right through me
making out my weak spots
my insecurities
you give me no warmth
I shiver when you're close
no hope for some patience
you keep me exposed
I still don't understand
how I could fall in love with you
now I'm burning in the cold
burning in the cold

you give me no hope
you've made your point quite clear
when I lay bare my feelings
all I get is your sneer
you give me no warmth
I shiver when you're close
no hope for some patience
you keep me exposed
I still don't understand
how I could fall in love with you
now I'm burning in the cold
burning in the cold

the night we spent together
will remain with me
the night I fell in love with you
- a special memory
but you've become so cold
I shiver when you're close
no hope for some patience
you keep me exposed
I still don't understand
how I could fall in love with you
now I'm burning in the cold
burning in the cold

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