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cold as the mountains

I actually intended to make this first stanza that I had come up with the chorus:

cold as the mountains that reach for the sky
tall as the small man asserting his claim
sharp as the gambler who wins without fight
calm as the hunter as he's taking aim


but then I came up with another that uses the very same meter and rhyme pattern:

fierce as a cornered and desperate rat
mean as the liar who needs an excuse
frantic as those who've been caught in the act
dashed as the lover who wanted the truth


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